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    Hannah
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    to some, the ocean is beautiful and freeing

    to me, it symbolizes my prison

    in an ocean full of people,

    i stand alone,

    screaming,

    crying for help

    i’m drowning

    and no one can save me

     

    #144755
    Ana
    Participant

    I’m sorry if you really feel this way, however your poem is absolutely beautiful.

    #155264
    Hannah
    Participant

    thank you

    #155286
    PearceHawk
    Participant

    Hannah your poem speaks volumes of pain. There are over 7.5 billion+ people on earth. The beauty of that is there is absolutely nobody like you. Although there are 7.5 billion people, out of all those people, even though you and I have never met, I KNOW that you are an uncommonly amazing and beautiful person. This is a fact of life. Darkness cannot keep out the light. You are the light that shines in a dark world of 7.5 billion people. I am not so sure about what you said, that “no one can save me.” I know that Ana, myself, Anita, and countless others here are reaching out their hand extending their hearts and souls to you. All you have to do is reach out for that and grab hold of those amazing people. I can assure you that one thing will happen. They will be there for you, as will I.

    I wish you all the peace, love, and happiness that life has to offer, for an eternity longer than a lifetime. It is the least you deserve.

    Pearce Hawk

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