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I Look into my Garden – a poem

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    Jim Darling
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    I am a writer Jackie and I like your prose … except for the repeat of the word shrivelled. Nice garden too. Is it on the sidewalk?

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    northof60
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    Thank you and I totally agree. When I saw it posted it really stuck out.

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